tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9182726119409953881.post9001867230416302175..comments2024-03-15T13:41:35.195+05:30Comments on कुछ कहानियाँ,कुछ नज्में: ये रिश्ता...sonalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03825288197884855464noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9182726119409953881.post-65625751908644293132010-01-27T14:04:02.622+05:302010-01-27T14:04:02.622+05:30सोनल जी बहुत ही सुंदरसोनल जी बहुत ही सुंदरसंजय भास्कर https://www.blogger.com/profile/08195795661130888170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9182726119409953881.post-18873052854817372242009-09-26T02:08:44.420+05:302009-09-26T02:08:44.420+05:30waiting anxiously........waiting anxiously........Dr Ankur Rastogihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17123828674001993190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9182726119409953881.post-6940123034788758232009-09-25T21:02:48.286+05:302009-09-25T21:02:48.286+05:30When ? waiting for next क्रमशःWhen ? waiting for next क्रमशःSulabh Jaiswal "सुलभ"https://www.blogger.com/profile/11845899435736520995noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9182726119409953881.post-10586385776919387912009-09-25T10:56:55.852+05:302009-09-25T10:56:55.852+05:30Thanks bhaiyaa......abhi to shruwaat hai "kah...Thanks bhaiyaa......abhi to shruwaat hai "kahani abhi baaki hai mere dostsonalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03825288197884855464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9182726119409953881.post-30762145979092222009-09-25T01:33:06.952+05:302009-09-25T01:33:06.952+05:30honest comment: well, once again, plot aachaa hai,...honest comment: well, once again, plot aachaa hai, rawangi bhi hai (and that's very imp for me as a reader) par pehla para baki plot se mel nahin kha raha, woh infidility ki taraf ishara karta hai.<br />Some more honesty: frankly, story (till now) lacks surprise elements, twists and turns and seems predictable.<br />Aapke writing style ki ek quality hai, i.e. words aur flow pehchana sa lagta hai. Now, this cud be both good or bad, depending upon how u use it.<br />One more point: Your stories have beautiful structuring......admired that in both the stories.Dr Ankur Rastogihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17123828674001993190noreply@blogger.com